School Project about electronic devices in everybodys life

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    Done.

    Here's corrected text, as there are a lot of grammar mistakes which make it hard to read:
    (Added a bit in parentheses to explain)

    3. What is your primary use for electronic devices?
    4.1. Are you using your electronic devices outside the home and workplace?
    4.2. What type of mobile device do you prefer?
    5. Do you use free wifi? (are you using implies "right now")
    6. What is your preferred device for accessing the Internet? (you don't use the Internet, you access the Internet)
    7. Which brand of electronic devices do you prefer?
    8. How happy are you with the variety of electronic devices available to you? (unusual to use "content" that way)
    9. How much do you spend on electronic devices every year? ("spend on", "invest in", or "pay for")
     
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    Thank you for your help. English isn't my native language so i'm very glad for every person who corrects me. :)
     
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    I figured as much.
     

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